User contributions for 1995hoo
A user with 6,633 edits. Account created on 28 July 2006.
26 April 2024
- 13:1513:15, 26 April 2024 diff hist +19 m National Hockey League →Teams: the sentence about the Coyotes suffered from singular/plural disagreement by using plural at the beginning and singular at the end. I tweaked the wording slightly to fix that and made one other minor wording change.
25 April 2024
- 15:1915:19, 25 April 2024 diff hist −3 m Washington Commanders →Unofficially retired: no need for passive voice.
- 11:3611:36, 25 April 2024 diff hist −104 Tommy Paul (tennis) Reverted a series of extremely vulgar edits by a serial vandal to the last valid version. Tag: Manual revert
24 April 2024
- 22:4522:45, 24 April 2024 diff hist +472 Talk:Springsteen and E Street Band 2023 Tour →Regarding List of Songs Performed: comment. Tag: Reply
- 20:1420:14, 24 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Atlantic Coast Conference →2010–present: An ampersand is not properly used as a substitute for the word "and" in regular running text. current
- 15:2715:27, 24 April 2024 diff hist +739 User talk:98.101.234.186 →April 2024: Please stop. current
- 15:2215:22, 24 April 2024 diff hist +1 Madison Square Garden Undid revision 1220558767 by 98.101.234.186 (talk)—apparent serial vandal. current Tag: Undo
23 April 2024
- 17:3217:32, 23 April 2024 diff hist +4 m National Hockey League Corrected punctuation errors (missing apostrophe in a possessive; violation of MOS:DATECOMMA when someone failed to include the comma after the year); fixed singular/plural disagreement ("Arizona Coyotes" is plural, so "its" is incorrect).
- 14:2614:26, 23 April 2024 diff hist +3 National Hockey League →Teams: previous edit contained two typos. I am not sure the previous editor's characterization of the Coyotes/Utah situation is entirely accurate from a legal standpoint, although from a practical layman's standpoint it surely is. I'll let someone else decide on that—I'm just cleaning up typos. (I'm not sure beginning a sentence with the word "This" is really a good idea, but every time I try to rephrase it I wind up with more of a mess, so I gave up.)
22 April 2024
- 19:3419:34, 22 April 2024 diff hist +643 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Concerts →What level of setlist detail is appropriate for a tour article?: Reply. Tag: Reply
- 19:1519:15, 22 April 2024 diff hist −3,592 Springsteen and E Street Band 2023 Tour →Set list: two paragraphs deleted because they had turned into a long list of songs performed that was both unsourced and arguably unencylopedic. The two paragraphs seemed to violate WP:STICKTOTHESOURCE, WP:NOTCATALOG, WP:NOTNEWS (insofar as they represented a running list of songs performed on the tour), and WP:NOTDATABASE. In short, this material seems more suited for a fan site like Greasy Lake, or the late lamented Backstreets.com, that revels in minutia.
- 18:4318:43, 22 April 2024 diff hist +3 m Utah NHL team →Establishment of the team: missing preposition.
- 18:1518:15, 22 April 2024 diff hist +335 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Concerts →What level of setlist detail is appropriate for a tour article?: Reply. Tag: Reply
- 16:5816:58, 22 April 2024 diff hist +1,534 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Concerts →What level of setlist detail is appropriate for a tour article?: new section. Tag: New topic
- 12:2312:23, 22 April 2024 diff hist −14 National Hockey League →Teams: the sentence I reverted in my last edit was still somewhat ungrammatical, so I've taken a stab at rewriting it. Also deleted the word "current" in regard to the Coyotes franchise because it's superfluous—there is no "past" or "future" such franchise.
- 11:3911:39, 22 April 2024 diff hist +15 National Hockey League Undid revision 1220173804 by Bentheswimmer11 (talk)—Good-faith edit turned it into an incomplete sentence. Also no need for so many spaces after a period, but the sentence fragment was the main issue. Tag: Undo
20 April 2024
- 19:0419:04, 20 April 2024 diff hist −9 m Utah NHL team No need to link the Jazz in consecutive paragraphs. I debated removing redundant links in the "establishment" section but decided not to do so for the moment.
- 15:2515:25, 20 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Utah NHL team →Establishment of the team: "NBA" is a defined term from earlier in the article and thus ought to be abbreviated here. Tag: Reverted
- 13:3113:31, 20 April 2024 diff hist +10 m Hershey Bears →Retired numbers: someone incorrectly inserted a bunch of hyphens where dashes were needed.
- 13:3013:30, 20 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Hershey Bears →Retired numbers: the word is "defenseman" in an article about a US-based team.
- 13:2713:27, 20 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Hershey Bears Another improper hyphen.
- 13:2613:26, 20 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Hershey Bears Replaced erroneous hyphens with en dashes; reworded to avoid "currently," which is generally deprecated.
- 01:5201:52, 20 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Utah NHL team "Team" is singular and therefore takes "its."
19 April 2024
- 21:5421:54, 19 April 2024 diff hist +14 Utah NHL team Undid revision 1219797084 by 156.34.67.212 (talk)—If your edit is accurate, then prove it by citing a reliable source we all can review. Tag: Undo
- 19:5619:56, 19 April 2024 diff hist +19 Utah NHL team Undid revision 1219781784 by 2601:582:8400:A1C0:4598:C27A:CD0F:70C (talk)—The league treats it as an expansion team, even if in all practical respects it's a franchise move. Changing your IP address to make the same edit multiple times doesn't make you right. Tag: Undo
- 18:2518:25, 19 April 2024 diff hist 0 1987 Washington Redskins season →Personnel: moved Anthony Allen from the regular roster to the scab roster. As the text further down (and in his article) explains, he started on the scab roster and then was signed to the regular roster after the strike ended. I seem to recall he wore #89 as a scab, but I don't have a source to cite for that. current
- 13:1713:17, 19 April 2024 diff hist −4 m Utah NHL team Changed plural to singular in the final sentence of the first paragraph to agree with the usage in the first two sentences, both of which use singular. Obviously this will likely change in the future once there is a real name.
- 13:1513:15, 19 April 2024 diff hist −12 m Utah NHL team Removed two parenthetical "defined terms" (MLS and NFL) because neither one appears in the article a second time. There's not much point in "defining" an acronym that is not used a second time. (The "MLS" reference was also awkward in terms of positioning a possessive form.)
- 12:4212:42, 19 April 2024 diff hist 0 m National Hockey League →Teams: "respectfully" was the wrong word.
- 12:3012:30, 19 April 2024 diff hist −33 National Hockey League →List of teams: revised the footnote for the same reasons why, two edits back, I removed the asterisk from the table as to Utah. The Coyotes are not "now Utah NHL team" according to the league and the franchise(s).
- 12:2812:28, 19 April 2024 diff hist −4 m National Hockey League minor wording change. This also avoids the issue of comma usage.
- 12:2612:26, 19 April 2024 diff hist −1 National Hockey League →List of teams: removed the asterisk from the Utah team. While, as a practical matter, obviously it is a franchise relocation, the NHL and the team have chosen to treat it as an expansion for legal reasons. Using the asterisk here is thus potentially misleading and is also inconsistent with the Utah team's article, which (correctly) calls it an expansion team.
- 12:2512:25, 19 April 2024 diff hist +1,277 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Ice Hockey →Potential Arizona Coyotes relocation: comment about potential inconsistency between articles.
- 02:1502:15, 19 April 2024 diff hist +19 Utah NHL team Undid revision 1219657610 by 2001:56B:9FF7:EB33:F824:B62F:988D:5AA2 (talk)—Nobody ever said there will be an expansion draft. But the NHL said it’s an expansion team. Their position controls, not your (or my) opinion. Stop vandalizing the article. Tag: Undo
- 00:2100:21, 19 April 2024 diff hist −52 m Utah NHL team →Owners: the article already defines the Jazz and the NBA further up.
- 00:2000:20, 19 April 2024 diff hist −32 m Utah NHL team →Establishment of the team: removed overlinking and unnecessary defined term; also word tweaks.
- 00:1700:17, 19 April 2024 diff hist +3 Utah NHL team →History of ice hockey in Salt Lake City: capitalization; multiple violations of MOS:GEOCOMMA.
18 April 2024
- 22:0522:05, 18 April 2024 diff hist −33 Arizona Coyotes Simplified the sentence about the arenas.
- 22:0322:03, 18 April 2024 diff hist +6 m Arizona Coyotes Hyphens are not used to separate date ranges.
- 21:0221:02, 18 April 2024 diff hist −2 Arizona Coyotes "Has" and "their" don't agree with each other. There's no ideal solution to this, but the subject/antecedent for both words is "franchise" (or, before my prior edit, "team"), which is a singular word. I therefore think the singular is grammatically correct here.
- 21:0121:01, 18 April 2024 diff hist +5 Arizona Coyotes Changed "team" to "franchise" in the first sentence. Perhaps pedantic, but with no coach, players, etc., it's not much of a "team."
- 20:5820:58, 18 April 2024 diff hist 0 National Hockey League →List of teams: alphabetizing where the Utah Youths appear in the table.
- 20:1920:19, 18 April 2024 diff hist −86 Arizona Coyotes Removed Utah from the infobox. As the article explains, the NHL is treating this like a Cleveland Browns/Baltimore Ravens situation.
- 20:1320:13, 18 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Arizona Coyotes →New ownership and the Arizona Coyotes (2013–2024): "warm up" is two words when used as a verb phrase.
- 20:1220:12, 18 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Arizona Coyotes another incorrect hyphen.
- 20:1220:12, 18 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Arizona Coyotes en dash, not hyphen, in date ranges.
- 20:0120:01, 18 April 2024 diff hist +6 m Arizona Coyotes Ugh, trying to avoid using a sentence to end a preposition with.
- 19:0319:03, 18 April 2024 diff hist −501 Subway Series →World Series matchups: The 2000 World Series does not belong in a table showing early and mid-1900s World Series when the Mets didn't even exist. The 2000 World Series is discussed further down the article. Tag: Reverted
- 17:4217:42, 18 April 2024 diff hist −29 National Hockey League Undid revision 1219589360 by Bryanth2o (talk)—violation of WP:CRYSTAL until it's actually confirmed by the league itself, not by the media citing anonymous "sources." Tag: Undo
- 15:4415:44, 18 April 2024 diff hist +2 m 2024–25 NHL season →Uniforms: singular/plural disagreement.
