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Kingdom of Hungary (1000–1301)[edit]

Previous peer review

I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to receive suggestions for its improvement before its GAN. Thanks, Borsoka (talk) 02:48, 1 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent article, but I have some comments. The article is actually contains only political history in chronological order. It would be good to write more about the economy (trade, coinage), art (literature, architecture), society and administrative system. English-language sources already exist for these, for instance The Economy of Medieval Hungary (Brill, 2018). --Norden1990 (talk) 12:45, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. Fair point. I have the book so I can expand the article. Borsoka (talk) 14:14, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Borsoka: from me, probably should add too the list of the monarchs, it really helped readers to understood better if we acknowledged the named monarchs or rulers of historical state/kingdom artical.. regarding the format its up to u, whether a section or an infobox Ahendra (talk) 15:23, 23 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your proposal. I will add a list. Borsoka (talk) 04:04, 24 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]