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Asymmetric hydrogenation

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I've listed this article for peer review because I just finished drafting it (by and large, I intend to add some industrial applications and maybe some images in yet) and to the best of my knowledge only one or two other chemistry editors have so much as glanced at it. Therefore, it is probably chock full of errors that need catching and I can't do it all on my own.

Style advice or anything else you care to add would also be much appreciated since it has been largely just me calling the shots so far.

Thanks, Bmalbrecht (talk) 23:49, 29 October 2012 (UTC)

It's a very good article, but perhaps not as accessible as it could be to the non-specialist. I copyedited it as best I could, mostly tweaking excess capitalization (on WP, unless something is a proper name only the first word is generally capitalized in captions and section headers) and wikilinking terms I didn't understand. You may want to read WP:NOTJOURNAL (especially #7), and do a bit of explaining at the beginning of the article to orient the general reader. Overall, though, a very good job; sorry I don't have the expertise for a technical edit. All the best, Miniapolis (talk) 00:46, 31 October 2012 (UTC)