Talk:Manuel María Gálvez Egúsquiza

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Did you know... that Peruvian foreign minister Manuel María Gálvez Egúsquiza was arrested by Chilean troops for refusing to sign peace with the cession of territory during the War of the Pacific?

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Did you know nomination[edit]

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The result was: promoted by Aoidh (talk) 16:18, 23 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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... that the Peruvian Minister of Foreign Affairs Manuel María Gálvez Egúsquiza was arrested by Chilean troops for refusing to sign peace with territorial cession during the War of the Pacific? Source: Bravo Maxdeo, Roosevelt (2016). Gálvez, en el sesquicentenario de su muerte heroica [Gálvez, on the sesquicentennial of his heroic death] (in Spanish). Lima: Biblioteca FMP. pp. 51–52.
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Created by 180app (talk) and 2x2leax (talk). Nominated by 2x2leax (talk) at 09:06, 6 January 2023 (UTC).[reply]

Article is new enough and long enough. No QPQ but might be unnecessary if one of your first nominations. For simplicity and length, shorten the Peruvian Minister of Foreign Affairs to just Peruvian Foreign Minister. Other than that, there is one portion of the text I spotted as lacking citations, so that will need to be addressed before passage. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 23:05, 10 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Are you referring to the second paragraph of the introduction section? If that's the case, the other sections explain everything mentioned there with their sources. Also, I added the sources in a paragraph that did not have them in this diff. 2x2leax (talk) 22:10, 12 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I was referring to a section under "Career" but it seems you've added a citation now. I'd still recommend the shortening change but other than that, should be good to go! Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:17, 12 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]