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Grammar and flow edits[edit]

Made mostly superficial edits, correcting grammar and sentence structure. More substantial changes:

Add a controversial disclaimer to the discussion of Aubrey de Grey's work. Think it's fair to say that it has this status in the wider field.

Removal of two sentences that seemed more opinion/conjecture:

Most "life extensionists" believe the human life span can be multiplied for already living persons.

Some say that it is enough only to make aging healthy and prolong healthspan - duration of life when person lives without serious illnesses

(I tried to incorporate non-opinion-based elements of the second sentence into the one following it).

I also removed some other smaller sentences that seemed out of place or detracted from the discourse. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sparrigan (talk • contribs) 19:55, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]