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Needs introduction at a comprehension level which does not require knowledge of a specialised area of physics[edit]

Currently this reads like a specialised physics text book. That might be ok in the body text, but it requires a great deal of knowledge understand any part of it, and as such is not "encyclopædic". As a completely random and hypothetical example - how would someone who took physics at a good university 31 years ago work out what "safety" means in this context? I suggest that at least the introduction be re-written to be actually introductory.

Scottwh (talk) 17:11, 23 November 2015 (UTC)Reply[reply]