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Comment: See also Draft:Ho Yan Lee.
Please do not submit multiple copies of drafts. It does not increase the likelihood that one of them will be accepted into article space, and annoys the reviewers. It is likely to be seen as an effort to game the system, and may result in the drafts being nominated for deletion. Robert McClenon (talk) 14:50, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

Ho Yan Lee

Ho Yan Lee (Chinese: 李浩仁) is a Hong Kong education entrepreneur born in Hong Kong in 1996. Ho Yan has launched Ho Yan Academy (Chinese: 浩仁教育中心) which prepares students for language proficiency tests (IELTS.^[1], TOEFL^[2] & JLPT^[3]).

Ho Yan was born in Hong Kong. At the age of 17, Ho Yan attended American Heritage School in Utah. He then volunteered for two years in Japan as a missionary for the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints. He taught anatomy as a teaching assistant at Utah Valley University and eventually graduated from Brigham Young University in 2020 with a Bachelor of Science in Exercise & Wellness. He married in 2023.

Active in the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints throughout his life, Ho Yan served as a ward missionary, seminary teacher, ward mission leader, and FSY counselor.

Ho Yan is active as a piano soloist and teacher. He started taking piano lessons when he was six years old. At the age of 17, he took lessons from Dr. Ralph Van Der Beek^[4]. At Brigham Young University, he began his piano lessons from his current teacher, Dr. Scott Holden^[5]

Ho Yan speaks fluent Cantonese, English, Japanese, and Mandarin. He also speaks basic Spanish. He passed the highest level of the Japanese-Language Proficiency Test (JLPT).

^ "Welcome to IELTS". IELTS. Retrieved 2024-03-28.
^ "The TOEFL Tests". www.ets.org. Retrieved 2024-03-28.
^ "香港日本語教育研究会". www.japanese-edu.org.hk. Retrieved 2024-03-28.
^ "Welcome to Treblemakers". faculty.weber.edu. Retrieved 2024-03-28.
^ "Scott Holden". School of Music. Retrieved 2024-03-28.

[1] "Welcome to IELTS". IELTS. Retrieved 2024-03-28.

[2] "The TOEFL Tests". www.ets.org. Retrieved 2024-03-28.

[3] "香港日本語教育研究会". www.japanese-edu.org.hk. Retrieved 2024-03-28.

[4] "Welcome to Treblemakers". faculty.weber.edu. Retrieved 2024-03-28.

[5] "Scott Holden". School of Music. Retrieved 2024-03-28.

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